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| Yoli wrote in pencil first, then reread and edited, then added color, all with good enthusiasm! |
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| "At The Beach by Rio: Me and my brother went to the beach and found shells and then we played in the waves. At the beach we heard that we heard that we heard that we heard This is what it was..." (Secret Ending, you'll never know, dear reader! Rio worked hard to revise this piece!) |
